這是第一次寫作文 因為我的作文能力很差 常常因為思考內容而花了不少時間 (完成一篇大約花2-3小時)
請老師幫我修改 也請老師給我一些建議 (文義是否通順 文法有無錯誤 如何加快速度...)
It was a repugnant memory. When I was in primary four, there was a detestable thief getting into my home. But fortunately, all of us were not home then and there.
As a consequence of the unowned house next mine, the suspect penetrated it to carry out what he aimed to do that was to enter my house and to steal. With the view of entering my house, the abominable thief broke the balcony window and got into my house smoothly.
He started to steal something priceless, such as diamonds, jewels, and a mass of money. In the wake of fulfilling his evil purpose, he found some beverages to drink, and then fell asleep right away, on account of alcohol.
Soon after then, I was after work and came back home. When I arrived at the entrance, I observed extraordinary situation. The door was opened, the window was destroyed, and a large number of things were ruined.
To be on the safe side, I went in carefully. On seeing the despicable criminal, I called the police to arrest him, and he was caught soon.
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